A Prison I Love

A wasteful city; pollution array.

A life, a dream, concealed in my dog days.

The beach, the trees, so cool; breezy.

Conflicting feelings surround me

But what else can I say?

At the end of the day…

Malaysia,

In Asia,

My cage.

My stage.

A memorable place

A memorable place

city lights in every single sight

A tourism place from day till night

Beaches cleaner than the sky

I could lay there till I die

Culture in every soul

Brought in every goal

This place I think

An ancient link

My past

At last

A Cold Night in Glasgow

A stunning view of Glasgow in my room

All the buildings are covered by the moon,

As November is closing by

The chance of Winter is quite high,

Watching the building glow,

While playing in the snow,

The mighty sales,

It never fails,

Oh me,

Oh my!

The City of Singapore

The City of Singapore

The City of Singapore, beautiful

The sound of its people, oh so peaceful,

The Colours and lights of downtown

The crowded sounds of Chinatown,

There is not a service

Where workers are nervous,

The Bubble Tea

Wish it was free,

But it

Is not.

Epping Forest

The leaves and trees become the heart within.
My mind, my fear begins to chill my skin.
I know this place, I know its feel
The joy, the love, the peace and zeal
Pick up a branch and hide
Down low where dirt resides
My life
Is here.

Task 1 - Rhyme and Meter

You all know what RHYME is - and it will be one of the first things you encountered when reading poetry as a young child. "Twinkle twinkle little BAT, How I wonder where you're AT" etc. However, as you are going to find, it is very difficult to use rhyme effectively when writing poems of your own. Too often, the quest to find a word that rhymes ends up changing the meaning of the poem altogether - like points on a railtrack switching the train to a totally different course. However, it is a challenge that is well worth pursuing - i.e. how to find a rhyme whilst not diverting the tracks of your meaning at the same time. And it is a challenge I am setting you this week too.

But, not one to keep things TOO simple, I am also setting you another challenge - and that is to do with METER. Meter is the term to describe the rhythm of a poem - and how that rhythm is created through the number and order of all the syllables in any one line. Those of you who listen to music will know how all music has a BEAT of some sort; some music has a strong and regular beat, other music has a less clear rhythm (and so would be very hard to dance to too!) This week, you are going to be writing poetry with a very regular beat. Here is how...

The simplest type of beat (or, as it is called in poetry, FOOT) is one that goes 'dee-dum' - i.e. made up of TWO syllables, where the SECOND syllable is stressed. This type of foot is called an IAMB; and this type of meter is called IAMBIC. Here is an example of iambic verse:

I cannot write iambic verse. 
My poem goes from bad to worse.

See how each line is written in TWO-SYLLABLE beats, with the stress (or emphasis) on the second in each pair. Try reading it with a hand clap on each stressed syllable:

i CANnot WRITE iAMbic VERSE
my POem GOES from BAD to WORSE.

This is simple, iambic meter.

Notice also how many feet (or beats) there are in each line. Four. We call these lines tetrameters:

• 5 feet = pentameter
• 4 feet = tetrameter
• 3 feet = trimeter etc.

Now look (or rather LISTEN) to how easily the regular rhythm can be broken. What if I had written 'can't' instead of 'cannot'; or 'poetry' instead of 'poem'? This would have totally changed and disrupted the rhythm of each line:

I can't write iambic verse
My poetry goes from bad to worse.

In the first line, there is one syllable MISSING:

I can't [***] write iambic verse.

Whereas, in the second line, there is one syllable too MANY.

My poeTRY goes from bad to worse.

Right. Now for your challenge. In a few weeks' time, we are going to try to produce some SONNETS. (VERY difficult!). But, in preparation, this week we are just going to play with rhyme and meter. I would like you to write a poem which:

• uses ONLY iambic meter;
• is 10 lines long;
• begins with two 5-feet lines (i.e. pentameters)
• then has two 4-feet lines, two 3-feet lines, two 2-feet lines and, finally, two 1-foot lines.
• rhymes each pair of lines.

Your poem should be about a place (city/country) that you know particularly well.

To help you, here is an example, although I cannot vouch for how good it will be since I am rushing it off for you right now! It's about a famous landmark in London...

View from Canary Wharf

The city snakes beneath the heavy sky,
The shadows tall, the river crawling by.
Commuters swarm; like locusts, they
Descend upon the dying day.
From high above I see
Them fighting to break free.
The dusk descends.
The chaos ends.
And time
is mine.

See what you can do, and remember: 

• Lines 1-2 = rhyming, iambic pentameters
• Lines 3-4 = rhyming, iambic tetrameters
• Lines 5-6 = rhyming, iambic trimeters
• Lines 7-8 = rhyming, iambic dimeters
• Lines 9-10 = rhyming, iambic monometers.

All on a powerful place of your choice.

BY MIDNIGHT ON SATURDAY 9TH FEBRUARY PLEASE.Good luck!!! :)